Tag: 2023 writing

Marshmallows challenge

 today we just did marshmallows as a challenge also I forgot about the pastas we had 

Pastas and marshmallow 

First we were talking about our ideas then second we had to stick up our

Marshmallows like we have to use the pasta to make the marshmallow go up

It was very very difficult to stick  the marshmallow  up but we knew we wouldn’t

Give up so we keeped on going then we managed to stick it up then it fell down 

We kept on going and going then we managed to stick it up again we 

Sticked to the wall we slowly went away from the marshmallows 

Then when we went away from the marshmallows 

So the marshmallow  will balance then  it balance but then my friend 

Khittamai bang in the table  then the marshmallows  fell down 

Then we did it again it managed to do it again and it stand then

Our beautiful teacher miss parrant took a picture of our beautiful
marshmallows and that all that happened. the end 🙂

recount Duffy assembly

On a windy Friday afternoon at Pt England School…me in the class and the other class had a cool assembly in the afternoon about duffy’s  cool adventure but duffy’s cousin came over stuffy.

Duffy said in her mind man stuffy is  annoying but the dad said it was bedtime but then stuffy couldn’t 

Go to sleep then stuffy  had an idea. when duffy was asleep she cut duffy’s space book when duffy woke In the morning she saw her space book cut. But when she saw it she was shock she said this out loud why did you cut it but then…stuffy said this you don’t like get then she started crying then duffy said no I like then. stuffy was happy then the next night stuffy was asleep and duffy was asleep to but she woke up early in the morning then she saw a worm hole when she went to the worm hole she saw an alien. When she saw the alien. The alien was her. but they had different names…duffy was screaming and the alien was screaming too… then there was stuffy but it was  an alien.but the alien was  smart she was communicating to the humans but duffy tried to escape but she couldn’t there was three worm hole the other one was cold the next one was a different dimension then finally the wormhole was her

Home the end.  

Capital Letters

7 Harehuka Drive

Elsdon

12 january 2002

dear hoani

I have really enjoyed living in Wellington since june.  I have made some friends at my new school, which is the rata school on Paremata street.  My teacher is Mrs rapana.  She is all right.  In our classroom we have a pet mouse called mr snow.  It is my job to clean the mouse house on tuesdays.

We have visited lots of interesting places like the museum, te papa.  I went to see rugby at the Westpac Trust stadium in september.  It was awesome to see Jonah charge down the field.

I am still playing rugby.  i play for the norths rugby club now.  We train on wednesdays.  My new friend Callum is in my team too.

Would you like to come and stay with us during the next holidays?  I hope you will.  say hi to all my old friends, especially to everyone at whenuapai rugby club.

Your friend

Jamie

My perfect holiday

My Perfect Holiday!

WALT:  create a piece of narrative writing using descriptive language.

 

Instructions: You are going to create a narrative about a perfect holiday that you would like to have with your family. You can go anywhere in the world that you like, this can be as imaginative as you like.

 

Planning

Who are the main characters? Me and my family 
Where is your family going on holiday? To a big mansion
What is one activity that you are going to do on your holiday? Talk about singing 
What is another activity that you are going to do on your holiday? Go to the pool,s
Beginning Going to the big mansion .
Middle Swimming and the beach.
End Hometime 

 

Start writing here:

→ today this is about me going on a holiday trip  with my dad, uncle and cousins. On Christmas me and my cousin, dad and uncle went  for a 2 hour drive to a big mansion with a swimming pool. First me and my dad were looking around so we know where the toilet and the shower and the living room and the bedrooms are. Ohya I forgot to tell you that we have to bring our  swimming togs  and blankets the next day we went to the swimming pool. When it hit 10,o,clock we had to get the we went to the beach until it hit 12,o,clock one we did that. It was  night time before we went to sleep. We packed up and we went back to our house. the end.